Guest Blogger: Jodie Renner: Heightening the Suspense, Part II

11 Mar

Techniques for Building Suspense
As I mentioned in part I of this article, all genres of fiction need some suspense, not just thrillers and action-adventures, to keep the reader interested and turning the pages. And of course, you’ll need to amp up the suspense a lot more if you’re writing a fast-paced, nail-biting page-turner.



After revealing your intriguing story question and showing your inciting incident, you can continue to build suspense throughout your story by using a number of techniques, such as:

* building the sense of danger slowly

* sprinkling in some foreshadowing (teasing) as you go along

* withholding information (revealing critical info bit by bit)

* using a tense mood and fast pacing

* adding ominous details to your setting (environment, weather, etc.)
* using compelling, vivid sensory imagery to bring your story world alive
* adding time pressures (a ticking clock) for your protagonist
* piling on new obstacles and complications that get in his/her way
* narrating the story through several different viewpoints
* giving the protagonist some inner conflict and tough decisions
* introducing a few surprise plot twists

* writing in some cliff-hanger scene and chapter endings
* creating a riveting, “close call” ending
General “big-picture” techniques for writing suspense

* First, make your readers care about your protagonist, by creating a likeable, appealing, strong, smart and resourceful but vulnerable character. If readers haven’t bonded with your main character, they won’t become emotionally invested in what happens to him or her.

* Start gradually, and let it build. When writing suspense, start slowly and subtly — give yourself somewhere to build. As Hallie Ephron says, “If you pull out all the stops at the beginning, you’ll have nowhere to go; worse still, your reader will turn numb to the nuance you are trying to create.”

* Create a mood of unease, by showing the main character feeling uneasy, worried about something or someone, or by showing some of the bad guy’s thoughts and intentions. Maybe, instead of anxious, your heroine is oblivious, but because we’ve just been in the viewpoint of the villain, we know the danger that’s about to threaten her.

* Use the setting to create suspense. To describe the surroundings of the character in jeopardy, use vivid details and sensory imagery that reflect or add to his angst or fears, and bring to life the dangerous situations he’s confronting. (More specifics on this in Part III.)

* Foreshadow trouble to come. To pique the reader’s interest and keep her reading, hint at dangers lurking ahead.
* Pile on the problems and continue to raise the stakes. A complacent hero is a boring hero. Keep challenging him, to amp up the plot and build a character arc in which circumstances force him to be stronger, cleverer, and more resourceful.

* Use delay and subterfuge: Either we know something the hero doesn’t, or the narrator-protagonist has crucial info he’s revealing little by little, doling out to us gradually — the clever author’s way of keeping us on our toes, anxious and questioning, eager to keep reading to find out more.

* Use multiple viewpoints, especially that of the villain. This way the reader finds out critical information the protagonist doesn’t know, things we want to warn her about! And getting into the head of the bad guy(s) always enriches the story.

* Write in cliff-hangers.  Jessica Page Morrell advises us, “To amp up suspense, orchestrate your scene and chapter endings so they don’t wind down, but instead keep the reader hanging. …endings are the perfect places to create cliff-hangers, revelations, and surprises.” But do vary your chapter endings.

* Create a few plot twists. Readers are surprised and delighted when the events take a turn they never expected.

* Add in difficult decisions and inner conflict. These will not only make your plot more suspenseful, they will also make your protagonist more complex, vulnerable, and interesting.

Part III of this series will cover some specific techniques for ratcheting up the suspense in your thriller or other crime fiction.


Jack M. Bickham, The 38 Most Common Fiction Writing Mistakes


Hallie Ephron, The Everything Guide to Writing Your First Novel


Jessica Page Morrell, Thanks, But This Isn’t For Us

See also: Writing a Killer Thriller, Part I, Writing a Killer Thriller, Part II, and Writing a Killer Thriller, Part III
Jodie Renner is an independent editor specializing in crime fiction. For more info on Jodie’s editing services, visit her website at:


Posted by on March 11, 2012 in Guest Blogger, Writing


6 responses to “Guest Blogger: Jodie Renner: Heightening the Suspense, Part II

  1. David Ingram

    March 11, 2012 at 6:10 pm

    These articles are an excellent guideline. Thank you.


  2. Beverly Purdy

    March 11, 2012 at 7:01 pm

    Jodie’s article on heightening the Suspense was great. I especially liked the comprehensive check list with practical tips on how to create a page turner. Even though I support a ‘green’ world, I plan to print out this article and keep it near when I write. Thank you Jodie!


  3. Pat Marinelli

    March 12, 2012 at 7:36 am

    I agree, Beverly. I also am careful of what I print out but this article is going into my writer’s ‘notebook’ that is kept right on my desk for quick reference. Great article, Jodie. can’t wait for the next part.


  4. Jodie Renner

    March 12, 2012 at 8:15 am

    Thanks so much for your comments, David, Beverly and Pat! I’m glad my tips are helpful – we all reap the benefits when your books come out! Keep on writing!


  5. bzzaragozaBarbara

    March 13, 2012 at 7:57 am

    These are great tips! Thanks so much! The hard part seems to be holding all of what you write above while in the moment of writing. It takes a lot of time and practice.


    • Jodie Renner

      March 13, 2012 at 8:07 am

      Barbara, I think the secret is to read tips like this ahead of time and regularly, and just let them ruminate in the back of your consciousness while you’re writing. Then reread this type of advice – and maybe a craft-of-writing book or two by an author like James Scott Bell, Donald Maass, Jessica Page Morrell, Stephen King, David Morrell and many more, before going on to the revision and self-editing stage. It’s always good to let several weeks go by between drafts, anyway, so you can approach your manuscript with fresh eyes.

      Thanks to Barbara and everyone else for stopping by!



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